Help with phrasing, please?

[rainbow]

This one is sticking me. I'd love a suggestion on how to take out the "see".

"Who can see that you've marked this entry as memorable?
Everyone, only people on your Access List, or just you?"

Edited, because I hadn't realised not having the second sentence would make such a difference in answers. Mea culpa!

What about
"Who has access to this memory:
Everyone, only people on your Access List, only yourself?"

Comments

(not a member of the docs team)

[celtic_maenad]

I definitely like this best. Though you've got a typo; "access levels your give your" should be "access levels you give your".

I expect that would have been caught before it got too much further. ;)

Re: (not a member of the docs team)

[ivorygates]

*snerk* Well, you caught it... *g*