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Help with phrasing, please?
This one is sticking me. I'd love a suggestion on how to take out the "see".
"Who can see that you've marked this entry as memorable?
Everyone, only people on your Access List, or just you?"
Edited, because I hadn't realised not having the second sentence would make such a difference in answers. Mea culpa!
What about
"Who has access to this memory:
Everyone, only people on your Access List, only yourself?"
"Who can see that you've marked this entry as memorable?
Everyone, only people on your Access List, or just you?"
Edited, because I hadn't realised not having the second sentence would make such a difference in answers. Mea culpa!
What about
"Who has access to this memory:
Everyone, only people on your Access List, only yourself?"