dubhain: (Default)
The Cat Whisperer ([personal profile] dubhain) wrote in [site community profile] dw_docs2011-04-02 12:42 am

SMOG Calculator

(Because I'd like to make my debut post with something useful:)

As DW's style manual states that FAQs should have a readability of 8.0-9.0 on the SMOG Readability Scale, and because I really hate trying to calculate such things manually, I refer anyone interested to: The SMOG Calculator.

Also? O hai, everyone.

(Ducks, to avoid bricks and brickbats being thrown at him for the heinous use of lolspeak in a [site community profile] dw_docs post.)
foxfirefey: A wee rat holds a paw to its mouth. Oh, the shock! (thoughtful)

[personal profile] foxfirefey 2011-04-02 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting!

My one observation is wondering if SMOG works well for specialized vocabularies like ours? I don't know much about the background, so.
azurelunatic: Vivid pink Alaskan wild rose. (Default)

[personal profile] azurelunatic 2011-04-02 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
Usually for lolspeak, I throw lolcats, not ducks. Though those fly better. Not sure how well they hold captions, though...
silverflight8: Different shades of blue flowing on a white background like waves (Fractal)

[personal profile] silverflight8 2011-04-02 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
*waves* Hi there!

Hmm, looks like most of the ones I edited are around 10-12, with one horrifying 14 in there. Oh dear.
denise: Image: Me, facing away from camera, on top of the Castel Sant'Angelo in Rome (Default)

[staff profile] denise 2011-04-02 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, the 8-9 score is more an ideal than anything else -- it's not always possible to get it down further! But it's an ideal that we should work towards, at least. Every point we can shave off makes the FAQs that much more accessible.
silverflight8: Barcode with silverflight8 on top and userid underneath (Barcode)

[personal profile] silverflight8 2011-04-02 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
I am mostly worried about the gigantic crossposting FAQ; I know what it's supposed to say and even my eyes start crossing. I think the others just have a problem with overly long sentences (in an attempt to cram information in).
Edited (grammar fix) 2011-04-02 05:38 (UTC)
denise: Image: Me, facing away from camera, on top of the Castel Sant'Angelo in Rome (Default)

[staff profile] denise 2011-04-02 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that's one of the ones that we're going to really go over with a fine toothed comb. It's got a lot of very technical information to shoehorn in!

I think the best approach to that one is maybe to break it up with some bolded headings or something? That way the eye doesn't see AUUUGH WALL OF TEXT. Or maybe even some illustrations, of the settings pages or whatever.
silverflight8: Barcode with silverflight8 on top and userid underneath (_support)

[personal profile] silverflight8 2011-04-02 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, headings would help. It's also really just about one thing, so not great to split up into separate FAQs. There's also a lot of stuff that can be put into bullets, or even a simple table, I think.
denise: Image: Me, facing away from camera, on top of the Castel Sant'Angelo in Rome (Default)

[staff profile] denise 2011-04-02 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
*nod* I'm all for fancy formatting tricks to make a wall-o-txt into something more readable!
denise: Image: Me, facing away from camera, on top of the Castel Sant'Angelo in Rome (Default)

[staff profile] denise 2011-04-02 05:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, yeah, totally. Semantic markup, yadda!
dreamatdrew: (Skullbutt The Tormenter)

[personal profile] dreamatdrew 2011-04-02 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
NOnononono....
Llama first, then duck.
dreamatdrew: An orange leopard gecko half hiding behind the leaf of a 'lucky bamboo' plant, looking directly at you. (Default)

[personal profile] dreamatdrew 2011-04-02 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
YAY LLAMA SONG!!
*Squees like a 4 year old on a pixy-stix high*
cesy: "Cesy" - An old-fashioned quill and ink (Default)

[personal profile] cesy 2011-04-02 01:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, the llama song. I remember when I could sing the whole thing from memory and get all the words right.
pauamma: Cartooney crab wearing hot pink and acid green facemask holding drink with straw (Default)

[personal profile] pauamma 2011-04-02 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I just lost The Game.
pauamma: Cartooney crab wearing hot pink and acid green facemask holding drink with straw (Default)

[personal profile] pauamma 2011-04-02 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi! (Did you ever figure out why your kittypics got miscounted on Scrapbook?)