Help with phrasing, please?

[rainbow]

This one is sticking me. I'd love a suggestion on how to take out the "see".

"Who can see that you've marked this entry as memorable?
Everyone, only people on your Access List, or just you?"

Edited, because I hadn't realised not having the second sentence would make such a difference in answers. Mea culpa!

What about
"Who has access to this memory:
Everyone, only people on your Access List, only yourself?"

Comments

[kyrielle]

I like these, but both seem to have the potential to make some users think they're blocking access to the entry, rather than the fact-it-is-a-memory. I think it's the phrasing "memoried entries" rather than "memories" that makes me think that - and by its prevalence I'm guessing it's a style guide decision here - in which case I've no idea how to solve it. I do know it doesn't seem to flow/read well to me.